Story Design: The Sequel

We talked about some of the basic principles of story design last week. For instance:

* Think rectangles, for "modular" layout.

* Avoid making readers jump over elements (pull-quotes, graphics, whatever) to continue reading the text.

Better placement options include:

* Below a headline. For instance, one common place to put a pull-quote is across two columns of text below a headline that stretches across three or more columns.

* Adjacent to a photo or photos. For instance, a photo/infographic combination is fairly common.

Remember, too, that such elements draw the reader's eye. So you probably don't want to place them at the bottom of a column of text ... where they'll draw the reader's eye right past the story and into an ad or something else on the page.

* Place heds so that they touch the start of the text and cover all the legs of text.

Decks generally go immediately below the main hed though they do not necessarily have to cover as many columns (or "legs") of text.

For instance (and of course, the lines are just a visual aid here):

Here is my main hed stretching over four text legs
Here is my two-column deck
stretching over two text legs

Here is the third leg of text.

The story continues ...

Pull-quote, perchance?

By Jessa Claeys

Here is the start of my story, which goes on for another 15 paragraphs.

Here is the second leg of text.

The story continues ...

Here is the fourth leg of text.

The story ends at the bottom of this leg.

* Avoid legs of text that are really long or really short.

A good rule of thumb is for legs to be from 2 to 10 inches long.

* Break up large blocks of text with something more visually interesting. The "dollar bill rule" can be a rough but helpful guide.

* Sometimes you get lucky: You have multiple photos to go with a story -- and enough room to run them.

Some guidelines:

* One photo should be dominant -- bigger and more eye-catching than the other(s).

Two photos of equal visual weight confuse the reader.

* Often, it's best to pick one horizontal and one vertical photo. The contrast adds visual interest.

That said, if your two strongest photos are both verticals or both horizontals, go ahead and use them together. The designs from Harrower offer some great options. Notice that in each example, one photo is clearly dominant.

* Cutlines can be placed in various places to create visual interest as well as provide information.

You might write separate cutlines for each photo. Or you might write one cutline to describe more than one photo.

Shared cutlines can be an especially good way to give a page some needed white space.

Writing a cutline that does not fill the entire space available for it gives the reader's eye a welcome place to rest in the middle of what otherwise can be a visually busy package.

Again, the Harrower pages offer various nice examples.

By the way, if you have a cutline that's running under a big horizontal photo, it will be easier to read if you run it in two "legs" instead of one long one. Each cutline leg should have the same number of lines of text:

BIG HORIZONTAL

PHOTO HERE

(four columns wide,
let's say)

If you run the cutline all the way across the four columns, it can be daunting for two reasons. One, the reader's eye has to track back and forth all the way across four columns, which can be tiring. And two, the cutline creates a dense text block all its own.


BIG HORIZONTAL

PHOTO HERE

(four columns wide,
let's say)

But if you run the cutline in two legs, each with the same number of lines of text, it can be less intimidating to read. And the "gutter" in between the legs provides white space to break up the visually heavy photo/cutline combo.

* A thin rule or "box" around the entire story package -- text, hed(s), photo(s), graphic(s) and cutline(s) -- can be a nice way to help the reader see immediately which pieces go together.

The box creates both unity (within the package) and contrast (between the package and whatever else is on the page).