But first ... some thoughts on the mechanics
of editing:
What is a comma but a claw rending the sheet,
the asthmatic's gasp? What is a question mark but what's needed to
complete this thought? Punctuation: What is it, after all, but another
way of cutting up time, creating or negating relationships, telling
words when to take a rest, when to get on with their relentless stories,
when to catch their breath? (And you -- you are breathing, are you
not, in the same rhythm that creates words?)
Karen Elizabeth Gordon, The Well-Tempered Sentence |
As mass communicators, we are guardians
of our language. What we write and broadcast, and how we craft our
messages,
can have profound effects on our readers and viewers. If we use a
word incorrectly, misspell it or commit a grammatical error, our
mistake is magnified by the vast reach of our medium. Our mistakes
can -- and have -- become gospel for our audience. Because we have
the power to corrupt language, we have the responsibility to uphold
its worthy conventions.
Lauren Kessler / Duncan McDonald, When
Words Collide |
Vigorous writing is concise. A sentence
should contain no unnecessary words, a paragraph no unnecessary sentences,
for the same reason that a drawing should have no unnecessary lines
and a machine no unnecessary parts. This requires not that the writer
make all his sentences short, or that he avoid all detail and treat
his subjects only in outline, but that every word tell.
William
Strunk Jr. / E.B. White, The Elements of Style |
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Besides,
there are matters of ...
* Consistency.
Inconsistency undermines credibility.
* Productive
work flow for you, the editor. You don't want questions about mechanics
to bog you down. Proper language use should become automatic.
* A consensus about what words mean. Readers must be able to understand a writer's
intended meaning.
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By
the way, a lot of you are interested in working in public relations.
Here is some information from a survey of top PR executives at each Fortune
250 company, plus 75 other
PR executives from smaller firms. (Survey conducted by John E. Guniven
of the U of Nebraska and published in 1998.)
Good
writing skills are ranked No. 1 among skills a person entering
the PR field needs.
* Very
important: 189
* Somewhat important:
3
* Not very important:
0
* Unimportant: 0
FYI, Nos. 2, 3 and 4:
* Good oral communication
skills.
* Understanding
of organizational strategy, goals, objectives and mission.
* Understanding
of financial statements.
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When
asked to grade new PR professionals' writing skills, the executives
said ...
* A:
5.7 percent
* B: 37.5 percent
* C: 40.1 percent
* D: 15.6 percent
* F: 2 percent |
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English
grammar is based on Latin. So here are some useful phrases before we
start ...
Canis
meus id comedit.
My dog ate it..
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Utinam
barbari spatium proprium tuum invadant.
May barbarians invade your personal space. |
Re
vera, potas bene.
Say, you sure are drinking a lot. |
Recedite,
plebes! Gero rem imperialem.
Stand aside, plebians! I am on imperial business. |
Fac
ut vivas.
Get a life. |
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There are eight parts
of speech:
Nouns
Name people, places, things and ideas
Examples: book, ethics, Iowa, Jane, Spanish
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Pronouns
Substitute for nouns (people, places, things and ideas)
Examples : I, its, someone, yours |
Verbs
Express action or states of being
Examples: edit, is, had written, would have been |
Adjectives
Describe nouns or pronouns
Examples: blue, good, smooth, unique |
Adverbs
Describe anything else, including verbs, adjectives, other adverbs
or even whole sentences
Examples: frankly, smoothly, well |
Prepositions
Show a relationship between a noun or pronoun and other words in a sentence
Examples: after, of, to, with |
Conjunctions
Connect words, phrases, clauses or sentences
Examples: although, and, because, but, either/or |
Interjections
Exclamatory words (rarely used in journalistic writing)
Examples: darn, holy cow, wow |
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Then there are parts
of a sentence. (There
are others, but these are the basic ones.)
Subject
The noun or pronoun that does the acting or the being.
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Predicate
Fancy term for a verb, as it is used in a sentence. |
Object
The noun or pronoun that is on the receiving end of an action. There are many
kinds of objects, including:
* Direct
objects tell us "whom" or "what."
Example: I (subject) hate (predicate) grammar (d.o.) * Indirect
objects are the people or things to whom or to which (or for
whom/which)
something is done.
Example: Grammar (subject) gives (predicate) me (i.o.) a headache (d.o.).
* Objects
of prepositions are nouns or pronouns that follow a preposition
in a sentence.
Example: Grammar (subject) causes (predicate) intense pounding
(d.o.) in my head (prepositional phrase, in which "head" is the object of the preposition "in"). |
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Words can be combined into phrases,
clauses or sentences.
Words
Each word is itself a part of a sentence, of course.
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Phrases
Groups of related words that are missing either a subject
(a doer) or a verb (an action or state of being) or both.
Examples:
* in the classroom (prepositional
phrase)
* playing Texas Hold 'Em (gerund
phrase) |
Clauses
Groups of related words that have both a subject and a verb.
Independent
clauses can stand alone as a complete sentence.
Dependent
clauses cannot stand alone.
Example:
The prospect of getting a job scares me (independent clause)
because I hear horror stories about the job market (dependent
clause introduced
by subordinate conjunction, "because"). |
Sentences
The simplest sentence has one independent clause.
Example:
I am sleepy. More
complex sentences can have multiple independent clauses (called
a compound sentence); one independent clause plus one or more dependent clauses
(a complex
sentence); or two or more independent clauses plus one or more dependent
clauses (a compound-complex sentence).
Examples:
* I am sleepy, and I am going
to take a nap (compound).
* I am sleepy because I stayed
up late last night (complex).
* I am sleepy, and I am going
to take a nap until my roommate wakes me up (compound-complex). |
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Can
you identify the parts of speech and the key parts of each sentence?
(This excerpt is adapted from a book titled
Technopoly, by Neil Postman.)
First,
identify all the verbs in this sentence.
What is the subject, the predicate(s), the object(s)?
Ideology
can be defined as a set of barely recognized assumptions that
direct our efforts to give shape
and coherence to the world. |
Identify
all the pronouns in this sentence.
Subject, predicate(s), object(s)?
If
we accept this as a definition, then the technology of language
must be seen as our most powerful ideological instrument although
its potency is seldom recognized. |
Identify
all the prepositions in this sentence.
Subject, predicate(s), object(s)?
Language
instructs us not only about the names of things but also about
which things can be named; because of language, our world is
divided into subjects
and objects, processes and things. |
Identify
all the nouns in this sentence.
Subject, predicate(s), object(s)?
It
tells us about time, space and number, and it forms our ideas
of how we stand
in relation to nature and to each other. |
Identify
all the adverbs in this sentence.
Subject, predicate(s), object(s)?
For
example, English grammar is rather aggressive, often making life
very difficult for those of us who would much prefer to think
of the world as primarily benign. |
Identify
all the conjunctions in this sentence.
Subject, predicate(s), object(s)?
There
are always subjects who act, verbs that are their actions and
objects that are acted upon; although most of us, most of the
time, are unaware of how either
language or ideology does its work, we are obliged to know the world as made
up of things pushing against -- and often attacking -- one another. |
Identify
all the adjectives in these sentences.
Subject, predicate(s), object(s)?
It's
scary to think we live so deep within the boundaries of our linguistic
assumptions that we have little sense of how the world
looks to those who speak a different
tongue. To put it simply, the language is a crucial bit of machinery, with
an ideological agenda that is hidden from our everyday view. |
Want
to try all the parts of speech in this sentence?
We
believe language to be a direct, unedited, unbiased and apolitical
expression of the way our world really is; however, it actually
functions like any other
piece of technology, available for human manipulation. |
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